User talk:Nincuevas/sandbox

Rani's Peer Review for Habitats Directive
First of all, great job! I like that you were able to contribute to several parts of the page. The information you provided is definitely informative and relevant. Your writing is also very clear. One thing that I can improve on from reading your work is to create links for words that have Wiki pages.

Some observations and suggestions:
 * I'm not sure if you need to cite each time you link a website to a word, unless you are citing from that Wiki website (although I'm not sure if you can cite Wiki pages).
 * The first paragraph of your History section may need a reference, since it's providing facts about the policy.
 * In the second paragraph of your History section, "from the public and the media during discussions projected by the NGO[5]. Also, which NGO are you referring to?
 * I think the singular form of species is still "species".
 * The first paragraph of your "Additional Information" section may need references too.
 * "...but it also develops a disquisition between “economy” and “ecology” (Van der Zouwen and Van den Top 2002)." Is this a reference? If yes, don't forget to add it to your reference list!
 * Maybe change the section title "Additional Information". You can categorize each part of the "Additional Information" into a different topic, so that you can change that title to something that fits better with your content.

You're doing great, Nina! Keep it up :)

Aishwarya Feedback
I love the variety you presented on this topic! One suggestion I have would be to expand on the History section from 1988 - 1992 and explain why that four year span was so significant (i.e. activism/protests maybe?). ACaliforniaA (talk) 17:03, 22 November 2017 (UTC)