User talk:Niortega/Jerry Pinkney/NamakaOK Peer Review

Thank you for your feedback! I was also thinking about the number of awards referenced in the lead and the fact that too many things were mentioned. I will address this, along with your suggestion to more aptly summarize Pinkney's contributions as an illustrator overall. Also, thanks for the information regarding outdated links: I'll remove/update these. I like your idea to relocate the Exhibitions section into being a subsection of Awards and Recognition (this makes sense). I was thinking about finding allowable images too, so I appreciate this recommendation as well. Niortega (talk) 02:19, 2 December 2019 (UTC)