User talk:Nisdaner

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

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-Liancetalk/contribs 22:55, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Jarrod Moses


A tag has been placed on Jarrod Moses, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Nat Gertler (talk) 23:07, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Taking a look at your edit history, it looks like you didn't intend to create this as a "live" article, but meant to submit it to Articles For Creation. As such, I've stopped the deletion, and moved the article to User:Nisdaner/sandbox/Jarrod Moses, where you can work on it further. Having looked at the article, it's not ready for release yet - it's full of boastful statements, which are not properly sourced. We avoid statements that suggest a point of view, and even simple factual information that would appear boastful needs what we'd consider a "reliable source" - a respectable third-party source, which generally doesn't include the company that the subject is president of. So the company's website would not serve to say, for example, that the company is on the cutting edge (that's pure point of view; at best, we'd say that such-and-such magazine said the company was on the cutting edge) or that the subject won an Emmy (although the Emmy website would be a fine source for that.) Let me know if you have any questions. --[[User:NatGertler|Nat Gertler (talk) 23:30, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:23, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 20:51, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 21:02, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

January 2016
Greetings. At least one of your recent edits, such as the edit you made to Draft:Jarrod Moses, did not appear to be constructive. Although everyone is welcome to contribute to Wikipedia, please take some time to familiarise yourself with our policies and guidelines. You can find information about these at our welcome page which also provides further information about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. If you only meant to make some test edits, please use the sandbox for that. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. ''Please stop resubmitting this draft until you ask for help. You may be trying to clean up the draft but are making it worse.'' Robert McClenon (talk) 21:03, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Jarrod Moses


A tag has been placed on Draft:Jarrod Moses, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:50, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (August 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Huon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Huon (talk) 19:43, 10 August 2016 (UTC)

Jarrod Moses is the Founder, Chief Executive Officer, and President of United Entertainment Group.

Moses's career began in 1991 working for Grey Advertising While at Grey he became the youngest President & CEO in Grey Advertising history. He stayed with the company for 16 years until its eventual sale, which he was part of, to WPP Group in 2007. Soon after the sale, Moses founded United Entertainment Group (UEG) as a joint venture with Hollywood’s United Talent Agency. UEG has developed campaigns for marketers such as Procter & Gamble, Frito- Lay, General Mills, AT&T, Diageo, and Starbucks. They also have worked with entertainment companies such as Time Warner, Comcast, MTV Networks, Facebook, and Google as well as directly with talent including Mark Wahlberg Rihanna, Queen Latifah, Pharrell, Katie Perry, Drew Barrymore, Ellen Degeneres, and Jimmy Kimmel.

Moses and his UEG team have been responsible for creating over 200 television programs, motion picture partnerships, concert tours, endorsement deals, product placements and celebrity partnerships. Moses has earned many industry accolades including Emmys, Platinum Records, Cannes Lions, and Effies. He has been featured in The New York Times, Variety, Hollywood Reporter, AdAge, and on NBC’s The Apprentice, CNN, ABC, Bloomberg TV and Radio, Fox Business News, and other various international publications.

In addition to his career, Moses has been an adjunct professor of marketing at Columbia University Business School since January 2012. He also is a member of the Board of the Hamptons International Film Festival, and a co-founder of the New York Comedy Festival.

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:44, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:20, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Jarrod Moses is the Founder, Chief Executive Officer, and President of United Entertainment Group.

Moses's career began in 1991 working for Grey Advertising While at Grey he became the youngest President & CEO in Grey Advertising history. He stayed with the company for 16 years until its eventual sale, which he was part of, to WPP Group in 2007. Soon after the sale, Moses founded United Entertainment Group (UEG) as a joint venture with Hollywood’s United Talent Agency. UEG has developed campaigns for marketers such as Procter & Gamble, Frito- Lay, General Mills, AT&T, Diageo, and Starbucks. They also have worked with entertainment companies such as Time Warner, Comcast, MTV Networks, Facebook, and Google as well as directly with talent including Mark Wahlberg Rihanna, Queen Latifah, Pharrell, Katie Perry, Drew Barrymore, Ellen Degeneres, and Jimmy Kimmel.

Moses and his UEG team have been responsible for creating over 200 television programs, motion picture partnerships, concert tours, endorsement deals, product placements and celebrity partnerships. Moses has earned many industry accolades including Emmys, Platinum Records, Cannes Lions, and Effies. He has been featured in The New York Times, Variety, Hollywood Reporter, AdAge, and on NBC’s The Apprentice, CNN, ABC, Bloomberg TV and Radio, Fox Business News, and other various international publications.

In addition to his career, Moses has been an adjunct professor of marketing at Columbia University Business School since January 2012. He also is a member of the Board of the Hamptons International Film Festival, and a co-founder of the New York Comedy Festival.

Jarrod Moses - Two Questions
I have two questions. First, do you want the draft in your sandbox reviewed? If so, do you want the version at Draft: Jarrod Moses deleted to make way for the sandbox version? Second, do you have a connection to Jarrod Moses? If so, please declare it via the conflict of interest policy. In any case, I would invite you also to consider other ways that you can help Wikipedia, such as by editing existing articles. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:56, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: User:Nisdaner/sandbox has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Nisdaner/sandbox. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 19:03, 13 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  20:59, 14 September 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jarrod Moses


Hello, Nisdaner. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Jarrod Moses".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 05:43, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Nisdaner/sandbox


Hello, Nisdaner. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 06:32, 22 May 2017 (UTC)