User talk:Nixxxi/sandbox

The main problem with the article is that it is written in too much of an "in universe" style. We do not want the crap about Protocol 55. The "letter to the Editor" is pure kayfabe and simply does not belong here. See if you can write a proper, short, neutral, arms-length article. Place it in User:Nixxxi/sandbox and raise the matter at deletion review. — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 16:18, 25 January 2010 (UTC) On reflection, I don't know why I am bothering. The NO is so childish that even its home page redirects to the splash page! — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 16:24, 25 January 2010 (UTC)

The reason it goes to a splash screen is that it is involved with a vodka brand and therefore they must verify that users are over 18 years of age. I think I have achieved what you asked of me now and hope that you are able to publish this for me. Nixxxi (talk) 18:18, 25 January 2010 (UTC)