User talk:Nizzafa/sandbox

Discussion about the sandbox pertaining to my work on Entertainment journalism
The following is a bibliography of some of the sources I will be using in my drafting process. Note: These are not set in stone and other sources may be used in the future. Nizzafa (talk) 02:10, 8 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Here is that list,

I will be adding more sources in the next couple of days Nizzafa (talk) 03:55, 8 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Sterling, Christopher H. (2009-09-25). Encyclopedia of Journalism. SAGE Publications. ISBN 9781452261522.
 * "Entertainment Wars: Television Culture after 9/11". American Quarterly, Vol. 56, No. 2 (Jun., 2004), pp. 235-270.
 * "With The Jinx, where does journalism end and entertainment begin?" - http://www.cjr.org/analysis/the_jinx_robert_durst.php — Preceding
 * "What Are the Requirements Necessary to Become a Journalist?" - http://work.chron.com/requirements-necessary-become-journalist-12514.html
 * Nowell-Smith, G. (2008). The Rise and Fall of Film Criticism. Film Quarterly, 62(1), 10-11. doi:1. Retrieved from http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1525/fq.2008.62.1.10 doi:1
 * Journalism: Critical Issues: Critical Issues By Allan, Stuart https://books.google.com/books?id=aaflAAAAQBAJ&lpg=PP1&ots=QBTUQu-Utg&dq=entertainment%20journalism&lr&pg=PR6#v=onepage&q=entertainment%20journalism&f=false
 * http://quod.lib.umich.edu/f/fc/13761232.0040.100/--editor-s-note-film-criticismthe-reboot?rgn=main;view=fulltext;q1=film

Peer Review
The Line Between News Journalism and Entertainment Journalism -Does a good job differentiating News Journalism & Entertainment Journalism. Consider a specific example of how journalists "skew facts in a particular matter

Popular Forms of Entertainment Journalism Film Criticism Spelling mistake Some poplar film review sites and blogs include Rotten Tomatoes, IMBD, and Metacritic. For more information on this topic check out it's wikipedia page.

Good job on informing audience on the importance of Film Criticism.

Video Game Journalism Good job on informing audience on the importance of Video Game Journalism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AndrewPreus (talk • contribs) 14:26, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Hey AndrewPreus, Thanks for the feedback and the check for any grammatical or spelling mistakes. I made sure to fix what you pointed out. Also thanks for the positive feedback about my Film Criticism section. Best. Nizzafa (talk) 14:27, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey Matt - nice job with the article so far! It's looking really good. Are you planning to develop some of the other sections, like Music Journalism & Celebrity Coverage, that you have sections for? Best, Prof.bgreg (talk) 17:27, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi Prof, Thanks for the feedback. I do plan on developing a little more for Music Journalism and Celebrity Coverage. I figure I'll work on those after I move some of the stuff on here into the live article. Thanks again. Nizzafa (talk) 14:27, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Additional Peer Review
-A clear structure --Consider making "The Line Between News Journalism & Entertainment Journalism" into separate Headings making them their own category. --Possibly form a "Popular Forms of News Journalism" under the "Popular Forms of Entertainment Journalism" IF needed.
 * I understand your input here, but the point to see how both forms of journalism can sometimes be confusing to the consumer. Thanks Nizzafa (talk) 23:23, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

-A balancing act

--Keep in mind the importance of your topic, what topics are most important to Entertainment Journalism? Elaborate on key subjects --Create viewpoints that are distinct to what your purpose is.

-Neutral content

--neutrality so far has been reached appropriately

-Reliable sources

--sources clarify any confusion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AndrewPreus (talk • contribs) 15:00, 31 October 2016 (UTC)