User talk:Njk47/sandbox

Interesting Stuff NJK47! Really love the content. Keep up the work. You really must love Wikipedia and learning.

Isabelle's peer review Overall you use concise language, and the sentences flow well. There are a few instances of questionable words that Wikipedia says to avoid: like "certainly" and multitude." I'll share the link to edits on here. The highlighted in yellow words are questionable words. I made suggestions in the document as small edits to help the logical flow and clarity of the writing. Each sentence conveys a factual claim/ further develops the plot. Wikipedia typically wants each sentence to be cited, so I think to add more citations to all of the parts but the plot sections would be extremely helpful and would help avoid people thinking the information in the themes section is original research. The edits you have made, make sense and flow.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L7HKLJ5gPi1xCAYmwPPPytSVEbI_w3Igvn4ltELEWdQ/edit — Preceding unsigned comment added by Icf17 (talk • contribs) 18:47, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

Tim's Peer Review

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DnMZ8uHMjZJnuy94ivGAfQwRbvZh9dMr-5PRPrhu0Wo/edit?usp=sharing — Preceding unsigned comment added by Timmyjohns (talk • contribs) 19:06, 15 April 2019 (UTC)