User talk:Njpierce16/Woodland Park, Colorado

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

You have done some very impressive work here -- just keep going in this direction. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo!

One thing to think about is how to maintain an encylopedic tone. Some of the material in the article is creeping away from the kinds of details that show up in an encyclopedia and towards the kinds of things that show up in a travel guide. It can be hard to draw the line here; keep looking at examples of high-quality city articles as you polish yours. Also, you don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 08:34, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi, I just finished up a peer review for your article. Overall, great work and I like the direction you are headed in. I am looking forward to seeing your final result! Bholmes8 (talk) 23:59, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow-up Review from Kaylea
You're doing very well on this assignment -- go ahead and make the article live when you are done working on it.


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Celebrate!

I went live!
All of my edits have been transferred to the actual Wikipedia page. --Njpierce16 (talk) 00:03, 11 February 2022 (UTC)

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:16, 7 February 2022 (UTC)