User talk:Nkemmis/new sandbox

I would recommend putting this under /Wind power in Mexico just so it's easier to find for Professor Tysick. In the second sentence, I would tread lightly with inferring. Try making more concise sentences that are simply stating facts. In addition, some of your sentences run on and could probably be simplified for clarity's sake, despite being statements. Other than that, I think your contribution is very accurate and contains very relevant information on resource availability. Good job! :) --LU1R6 (talk) 02:55, 3 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Really good addition, but here are some things you may want to consider changing: I do believe the second sentence seems somewhat opinionated even it was taken from an article so you may want to slightly reword that. All of your sources are quality and I had no problem accessing them. Other than the second sentence your additions seems very well put together. Ajpettis (talk) 04:25, 3 December 2020 (UTC)