User talk:Nkmerr28/sandbox

- Suggest condensing the locations down to a region and maybe a few states. In the first sentence, it already states where this type of tree grows, I do not know if it is necessary to expand so much later on in the next section ForestGreenSweater (talk) 14:53, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

review
Introduction
 * "found from Maine south to Georgia" change "Maine south" to southern Maine"
 * "Because of their large north-south range, the trees are associated with a wide variety other wetland species." Flip both clauses of the sentence so that you don't start the sentence with a conjunction.

Distribution and habitat - things i would change
 * No need to list all states, geographical locations could be consolidated into general regions while emphasizing that they are located along coastal lands
 * add historical section, how they ended up where they are now would make a nice transition into this section
 * remove geographical locations of wildlife refuges if you link to them

I would also review any grammatical mistakes in other section that i might have missed

RemyLukeBirnbaum (talk) 15:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

Grammar of the following sentence could be improved (two verbs in one sentence) "...is a species of Chamaecyparis, native to the Atlantic coast of North America is found from Maine south to Georgia..." Truong.ci (talk) 15:23, 25 March 2016 (UTC)