User talk:Nm100/sandbox

Peer Review:

Hello, I think you've created a great page that represents and explains Up First well. You've formatted this article nicely with a good first paragraph that successfully describes the show overall. One thing I noticed was that at the end of the second paragraph it says critics and polls have been shown to favor The Daily, this statement needs be cited. Maybe find one poll or critic that favors The Daily then mention or cite it/them. Another more subjective thing I noticed was that the first sentence of the third paragraph sounds a little like it's trying to sell Up First. I got that impression because it starts with the target audience and then explains the solution which is a common ad formant. Maybe re-work the sentence to start with "Up First is NPR's way to deliver a fast but broad overview of the day's news which will be in Morning Edition." Overall you've made a clear and thorough article. I can't believe Up First had so little on Wikipedia! You're making a valuable contribution. MSulka (talk) 01:57, 7 March 2018 (UTC)