User talk:Nm7045/Neonatal line

Hi! I think the edits made to this article are clear and make sense. I personally think the definition of neonatal line should come before the explanation of its formation in the introduction. I also think some of the use of "it" at the beginning of sentences in the introduction can be a little confusing to figure out what "it" is referring to. Lastly, in your references, the dates need to be reformatted slightly and citation [2] does not seem to be the citations you intended. Overall, great job! LemonLawrence (talk) 15:37, 16 November 2021 (UTC)