User talk:Nmalq001

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The Vaccine War moved to sandbox
Hi, Nmalq001. I just wanted to let you know that I moved your article back to User:Nmalq001/sandbox, because it isn't ready to be published yet. To remain published, Wikipedia articles need to have sources that discuss the subject of the article in depth. There were many sources about vaccines and anti-vaccination in your article, but none that actually discussed the film itself. You need to add sources such as film reviews or news articles that are specifically about The Vaccine War. Also, you may want to read Wikipedia's guidelines on plot summaries: WP:PLOTSUMMARY. Thanks and happy editing. Pinging for more advice. SpicyMilkBoy (talk) 17:02, 9 March 2020 (UTC)

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Hi. When my page was revised, it was pointed out that my synopsis and such may be argumentative based and that I may want to review the guidelines for an essay. Where could I improve because I went through the entire documentary, breaking down each significant part without provided an opinionated bias within the synopsis. Thank you for the feedback. Nmalq001 (talk) 17:02, 10 March 2020 (UTC)nmalq001
 * Wikipedia articles need to be based on secondary sources, like reviews, books, or news articles that specifically discuss the documentary. The issue with your article is that it is mostly a summary of the documentary, which is considered a primary source. The other content in the article relates to vaccines and anti-vaccination in general, but not to the documentary. To understand how an article like this should be written, you can look at other articles on documentaries - for example, see the article on Behind the Curve. You can see that the references are all reviews of the film and the article only includes information that is directly related to the film, rather than discussing the Flat Earth movement in general. The synopsis only gives a brief summary of the documentary rather than detailing everything that happens. Hope this helps. SpicyMilkBoy (talk) 17:58, 10 March 2020 (UTC)