User talk:Nmarin97/sandbox

Hi Nathaly and Devonte, Great work so far. We are cleaning up formatting and doing some editing, but this is a really good first draft.

To move your stub toward publication you should try to insert more references directly into the text. When you mention a specific line of research, cite publications that are representative of this work. Look up her work in Google Scholar to get an idea of what studies have had the largest impact, and include citations to these studies in your stub. https://scholar.google.com/scholar?hl=en&q=patricia+greenfield&btnG=&as_sdt=1%2C33&as_sdtp=

Here are some other links that may help you to describe her major contributions: http://www.slate.com/articles/technology/future_tense/2014/08/technology_in_the_classroom_patricia_greenfield_says_kids_don_t_need_it.html https://www.britannica.com/biography/Patricia-M-Greenfield

You should also find ways to connect your stub with existing Wikipedia content. Definitely connect her to her daughter's Wikipedia article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lauren_Greenfield

Also mention her graduate school advisor, Jerome Bruner, and link to his article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jerome_Bruner

You should add some external links at the bottom of your stub: http://www.cdmc.ucla.edu/Welcome.html http://greenfieldlab.psych.ucla.edu/Welcome.html https://www.psych.ucla.edu/faculty/page/pmgreen

Brooks patty (talk) 16:47, 9 November 2016 (UTC)