User talk:Nmcritchley01

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shenandoah salamander (April 18)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 23:19, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Shenandoah salamander
Thanks for expanding Shenandoah salamander. I understand it may have been for a conservation course, but Wikiepdia is a general encyclopedia, and the article lends far too much coverage and needless detail to conservation. Neutral point of view means in part that aspects of topics should be treated in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources (see WP:PROPORTION). An article can be 100% factually true, but still unbalanced. Your sections on Conservation can be condensed and summarized into probably a few paragraphs, without going into intricate detail on individual researchers, documents, or relatively trivial exact dates. I have condensed some, but also be wary of inadvertently presenting arguments or opinions (e.g. from Center for Biological Diversity) as facts, especially if they give disproportionate emphasis to any views. Cheers, --Animalparty! (talk) 22:29, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:02, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Shenandoah salamander


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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CommanderWaterford (talk) 16:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)