User talk:Nmilashus/sandbox

Tracey Chung's Peer Review
First paragraph: I like how you specifically defined all the terms in this section. Makes it clearer to read and understand. I don’t think there was anything to correct about this section.

Second paragraph: In the first sentence, is the cavity formed in embryo development?

Illustration: Great diagram, but I think you should include arrows to illustrate the direction and movement of cells as they form the cavity.

References: Your references are properly formatted. I think that this was an easy read, adequate information was presented and was clearly stated. I could easily understand the topic of this draft. Nicely done! Traceychung (talk) 01:53, 18 March 2018 (UTC)