User talk:Noahwest85/sandbox

Gabriel's Peer Edits
I think this article is very informative and concise and perfectly displays informative writing. I think the sources you used were spot on and you used them in a positive way. I would add a subtitle or section title to make it clearer for your reader.

I would also add another section regarding solutions to debris-covered glaciers. You did a great job explaining the phenomenon but you could go into so much more depth regarding what we can do about it. Overall, great article and great information.