User talk:Nobro2/sandbox

Ben's Peer Review
Interesting additions! I think they're helpful to understanding Tourani and giving more information to the page. You don't have much there, but hey neither do I! It's pretty hard finding new information to add that is applicable, but the portion you added about Germany's invasion is very important to the city's history. Mostly, I thinking you need to rework the grammar in the first sentence. It's a little misleading and seems like you've got a dependent clause followed by a conjunction. Pretty simple mistake I think we've all done before, just needs some proof reading. I'm thinking you should give more details as to why the US Army come to Belgium but perhaps that information is given more clearly on a page dedicated to this specific invasion. Otherwise, a good start to a proper addition!

Nick's Peer Review
I liked learning about Tournai in World War 2 - it's a particularly fascinating point of history for me. Also, the castle I'm writing about for my edit got it's limestone from Tournai! I also had a bit of a tough time adding some substance to my post, but keep looking, I had to translate from a dutch site.

Are there any additional details you could add on the restoration aspect? I also saw that Ben mentioned grammar above. There is some improvements that could be made, but I would consider them just minor. Great job otherwise, I'm interested in seeing what you'll add in the future. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Regan nick (talk • contribs) 20:48, 24 April 2019 (UTC)