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Hkim856 (talk) 14:53, 19 October 2018 (UTC) This is certainly an important topic, and especially since the existing article lacks an in-depth discussion on the recent juncture, your improvement will be appreciated by the interested readers. I wonder where you'd like to place your draft, as you've assigned two existing articles. Also, could you provide more up-to-date information on the Chinese ban on Korean imports?

The topic was interesting and I think it was really good that you cited from several references. Ayoshimoto (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:22, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

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I like your structure and content. Maybe you could add more information about which and how specific groups are affected by China's ban. Examples could be K-pop idols acting in Chinese dramas or films, appearance in variety shows and concerts in China. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xu388 (talk • contribs) 20:14, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

I think your topic is very interesting and definitely important to discuss, since it is such a major deal. I also agree with one of the other reviews; maybe explain how it has specifically effected K-pop groups/artists (like EXO's Lay, etc) and their activities in China. I really liked the variety of sources that you used and overall I think your section is great! Stlamers (talk) 03:23, 30 October 2018 (UTC)