User talk:Noelle at LiveView Technologies (LVT)

Username issue
Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that your username, "LiveView Technologies", may not meet Wikipedia's username policy because it appears to be a technology company in Lindon, Utah. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. As an alternative, you may ask for a change of username by completing the form at Special:GlobalRenameRequest, or you may simply create a new account for editing. Thank you.  Velella  Velella Talk 23:33, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

January 2023
Welcome to Wikipedia. Because we have a policy against usernames which give the impression that the account represents a group, club, organization, company, or website, I have blocked this account from editing. You are welcome to continue editing after you have chosen a new username that complies with Wikipedia's username policy.

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Thank you. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 12:11, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

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March 2023
 You have been blocked indefinitely from editing because your account is being used only for advertising or promotion. If you think there are good reasons for being unblocked, please read the guide to appealing blocks, then add the following text below the block notice on your talk page:. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 20:04, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

Reply
I'll leave the question of if or when you are unblocked to others, but since you asked what was wrong with your draft, here goes

Your obvious conflict of interest, although you have declared it, makes it difficult to write appropriately. Please read the following regarding writing an article.
 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
 * You didn't reference all your text, and the references you did give were press releases, interviews, and in one case an article written by a company manager, not independent third-party sources.


 * The notability guidelines for organisations and companies have been updated. The primary criteria has five components that must be evaluated separately and independently to determine if it is met:
 * significant coverage in
 * independent,
 * multiple,
 * reliable,
 * secondary sources.
 * Note that an individual source must meet all four criteria to be counted towards notability.
 * You tell us a lot about what it sells, but not much about the company, such as how many employees. You give percentages for growth, but not actual figures $100 to $133 is 133% growth, as is $100 million to $133 million


 * you must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * Obvious prom includes Just the physical presence and visibility of LVT’s on-site security towers outside retail locations have helped many customers reduce theft by over 65%, and theft-related shrink costs by more than 85%... ushered in a new era of remote management, expanding the capabilities of the company’s mobile units and vastly increasing reliability. 


 * there shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * you must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 10:05, 29 March 2023 (UTC)