User talk:Nom202/sandbox

I would get rid of the bullet points and rewrite it in paragraph form. They are incomplete thoughts and kind of hard to follow.Rme22031 (talk) 18:16, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

I would also suggest putting the bullet point facts into paragraph form. Another suggestion would be clear up some of the grammatical issues like sentence structure and syntax. Try to explain who she marryied since her last name was originally O'Flaherty.--18:28, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Brbrewer94 (talk)

Hi, your information is sufficient about Kate Chopin early life. I would recommend you to include the information in the " Teaching " that Kate Chopin's writing career was also influenced by a French writer named Guy de Maupessant. In addition, in the Kate Chopin's life, she had an affair that also affects her writing style.Khactung273 (talk) 18:51, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

First could use the bullet points in paragraph form. Also talk about her last name before she got married.Majid367 (talk) 18:56, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Umar Rana