User talk:NoorAlAnkar

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Hello, NoorAlAnkar, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi - it looks like your article was moved back to your sandbox by, who stated that it was written in too much of an essay style. I do agree with him on this. While the content is interesting, it does have things in it that mark it as an essay. For example, you have phrases that could be seen as personal reflections on the topic - be careful with these, as you always want to make sure that you attribute anything that could be seen as an opinion or theory on something. Opinions and theory are seen as fairly relative - not everyone may see things the same way and attributing these elements to specific people or organizations also helps make the article more informative. You also need to make sure that all of the content is properly sourced - unsourced content comes across as original research, which shouldn't be on Wikipedia.

I hope this helps explain why it was moved! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:04, 21 December 2017 (UTC)