User talk:Noperti/citing sources

Lane's Peer Review
When I read the edits made the only problem I really noticed was some small grammatical errors and some opportunities to improve sentence structure. Sometimes the paragraphs were a little bit redundant or convoluted, some points could have been slightly more concise. Overall I think you did a good job with this article, the contributions to the article are both substantial and informative. I thought it was interesting to learn about the Sawshark and the differences between the various species. It is evident that you did a good job researching this subject and it is clear that you are knowledgeable on Sawsharks. The article looks much better new.