User talk:Norac Eeb

Your submission at Articles for creation: ThreatConnect (February 7)
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LaMona (talk) 02:22, 7 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Threat Intelligence Platform (February 7)
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LaMona (talk) 02:26, 7 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Threat Intelligence Analyst (February 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  07:45, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

April 2016
Hello, I'm I dream of horses. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one or more of your recent contributions to Draft:ThreatConnect because it appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  15:45, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry about reverting your edit. I shouldn't have done that. Feel free to ignore the above warning. -- I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  15:46, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest
I'm confused, how does this page not express any COI and get published? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Splunk

Norac Eeb (talk) 16:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

published Threat Intelligence Platform
I published Threat Intelligence Platform after removing quite a bit of cruft because I'm interested in the subject. The article was written more like a cost benefit analysis than an encyclopedia entry. You should put it on your Watchlist (click the star at the top of the article) and inspect all new edits. You should probably read WP:WEASEL to avoid using descriptors and pov leaning adjectives in your writing. The Wikipedia is really, really dry writing, think of writing the software manual rather than the sales proposal.

The article still may be a little fluffy, but let's see if other editors improve it. Regards 009o9 (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:ThreatConnect has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:ThreatConnect. Thanks! 009o9 (talk) 19:30, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Threat Intelligence Analyst


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Boomer VialHolla! We gonna ball! 03:07, 17 April 2017 (UTC)