User talk:Normaa22/sandbox

Peer Review After reviewing your writing, I have a clear idea on what you are focusing on and what your statement is. Especially your references, all of them are in an organized and formatted regulation, which have help me while reading through the writing paragraph by paragraph. In addition, your content of writing is perfectly related to your assigned title, but instead of having an unrelated topic that is off the track. Reliable sources, neutral statement and organized format of writing provide a comprehensive idea and perspective of your point to the readers.

Thank you, I will re-read my article, fix any errors and organize my sources better. I tried to stay on topic, so I am glad you felt like I stayed on topic throughout my article. - Norma — Preceding unsigned comment added by Normaa22 (talk • contribs) 00:03, 13 May 2018 (UTC)