User talk:NotPatrickLow/sandbox

Work Plan

Article chosen: Vaginal Discharge Why this one? Include WP rating scale? How fit with your interests. Other details as desired: This is an S class article, a start-class article that is preliminary with plenty of room for improvement with a completeness score of 62. We are both curious about OB/GYN and excited to contribute to this field. You WP editing team (up to 3): Jasmin Wilson, Taryn Sirias Initial Analysis of the article: The article is pretty comprehensive and discusses normal versus abnormal discharge. While the information presented seems accurate, the article is lacking treatment options or information on when to seek care. The language could be changed to be less binary and gender inclusive. Overall organization, what changes what will you add?: Pictures of abnormal discharge, “when to seek care”, “prevention option”, diagnosis/tests of abnormal discharge What will you remove?: Language that reinforces gender-and-sex binaries What will you augment?: Patient education about what to expect at a gynecological visit and how to prepare What will you decrease coverage of?: NA Roles in the project. List members and planned roles.: Jasmin: Images and diagnosis, Taryn: Prevention and when two seek care and gendered language edits Both: Review other’s work for readability, combine citations at end Team coordination plan: Timeline: Training: 08/30 Individual edits: 09/09 Team edits: 09/12 Edits responses: 09/17 WIP presenter Both

NotPatrickLow (talk) 17:14, 30 August 2021 (UTC)