User talk:Notjane

Noah
Hi, Notjane. I'll recreate the article here shortly. In addition to adding independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines, you will need to use a less promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. One example of unsourced claims presented as fact include: providing leadership, focus and inspiration..., but the whole tone is one-sided and opinionated.

It's all about what the organisation does, little about the organisation itself, no locations, number of employees/members,organisational structure or funding. There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections. I hope this helps  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  17:54, 20 November 2013 (UTC)


 * That's a great deal better. I made these edits, mainly formatting, adding wikilinks, improving references.


 * You could add more wikilinks to other articles, and I imagine you could add dates and/or authors to the web refs I didn't look at. If you can add more about the organisation, that would be good. Is the chair anyone famous you could link to?


 * Basically, once you've had another run through as I've just suggested, it's ready to go. Use the "move" tab to take it back to article space, don't cut and paste. Let me know if there are any problems.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  07:04, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Looks pretty good. I've removed the last EL, it's pointless having an EL where you have to pay to see the text, and the abstract is pretty spammy  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  11:53, 21 November 2013 (UTC)