User talk:Notjustbio/sandbox

Hi there!

I think your ideas for the article are very good! There's not much in the article, so its pretty open to additions. Briefly looking at the article, the conservation status has been added, so maybe that isn't need for improvement. I think your best bet is to focus on the habitat, behavior and classification. You seem to have good sources for each of those categories, and can definitely provide some brief overviews of each section.

It may be easier/better to focus on one aspect (habitat, behavior, etc) if there is a great deal of info on each of those. On the other hand, if there isn't much on the hairy footed gerbil. being broad would probably be better. I'm unsure what the literature looks like on this animal. Doing a history section may be difficult, as animal history strays quickly into evolutionary biology, which may get a bit hard.

Otherwise, the plan looks good. Narrow it if you find that more convenient, but otherwise I think it will be quite successful.

Ghuske (talk) 16:19, 28 March 2021 (UTC)