User talk:Novemberjazz/Archives/2023/May

Edits to Colin Miller (ice hockey, born 1971)
Please see concerns raised at Talk:Colin Miller (ice hockey, born 1971), and respond there. Flibirigit (talk) 16:13, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

The Weight (The Sopranos}
Hello, Novemberjazz -

I will explain the amendments I have made to your amendments.

in Manhattan : detail, not needed

sanction : ambiguous - sometimes means action for, sometimes action against

is (visiting) : changed to "will be visiting" to make future clear

to visit his father : already mentioned

in the basement : detail, not needed

Hope this satisfies you. April 31st (talk) 07:29, 7 May 2023 (UTC)

Van Morrison
Hi Novemberjazz. I note that, like some others, you are not comfortable with aspects of the lead of Van Morrison, and I agree that it needs working on. I think it would be useful to talk though the lead to arrive at a wording that has consensus. I've started a discussion on the talkpage: Talk:Van_Morrison. SilkTork (talk) 08:55, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

Nomination of Angela Besharah for deletion
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