User talk:Nskumar01/sandbox

I understood everything clearly. Awesome job! --RJCMorgan (talk) 23:48, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

I think this page was very interesting! It was the first time I heard of this disease and the story behind it really caught my attention. It was short and sweet and to the point, which is what I like, but I think some of the bigger medical words could use some more explaining, because I wasn't sure what they meant; and if I was a random reader I wouldn't want to have to click on them to read a separate article about all those different words to figure out what is going on in this illness. Just a short addition to a sentence explaining what some of the linked words in blue meant would be immensely helpful. Other than that I think it's great!!

Bksiazek (talk) 04:15, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

--Sweiner02 (talk) 22:19, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
 * You've done a good job of linking heavily to other articles, and making it lay accessible.
 * First line of diagnosis is confusing.
 * Missing recent research, prognosis.
 * Signs and Symptoms needs a citation for the rest of the material. Otherwise, well-cited.