User talk:NuclearGandhi/sandbox

FEEDBACK: - you should have a lead sentence before your first section - maybe have some content about her early life/childhood (where she grew up, went to high school, etc) - you should have citations, especially for things like her Education (graduated from Carleton: proof of her attendance at Carleton) - citation to some of her research when you mention her fields/specific research - if you think you need/want more content, dive a little deeper into some of the topics you mention (like her research) - good job maintaining neutrality! no excessive adjectives - very good job keeping things Wikipedia-friendly in terms of voice/content

primary feedback: 1. more citations, 2. add lead sentence, 3. add more content about her specific research/qualifications

Becca's comments
add an info box add a photo

need a lead sentence

Early Life & Education need to hyperlink your info and provide references also what does "gained her post doctorate" mean? where did she get her PhD? be more specific

Research Remove "Dr."

please expand and provide citations/references. link the topics and projects you are talking about to other parts of wikipedia and/or other websites you need to discuss how her work has made an impact - what are her research interests? what are her seminal works?

You need to add significant information throughout your biography. This information needs to be cited. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 02:20, 16 September 2018 (UTC)