User talk:Nyaronya/Mother/Android

Hello, I've completed a peer review for you that you can find here: #REDIRECT Nyaronya/Mother/Android/Neutralplaid Peer Review Neutralplaid (talk) 01:38, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I've also completed my peer review. You can find it here: User:Nyaronya/Mother/Android/HannSel19 Peer Review. Great job! HannSel19 (talk) 09:33, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

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Hi Paula,

Your article draft is looking good! I appreciated that you recognized where the best places to improve the article were. I know you only made minor changes to the Plot section, but I think that was wise on your part, because the Plot section was already one of the stronger sections of the article. The minor changes you made do seem pretty good for the most part too. For example, this sentence from the existing article: "Georgia tries to wake up Sam, to no avail" I think you really improved.

Your edits to the Production and Reception sections seem fantastic though! I really like how much you expanded them, that you created subsections, and that you used such high-quality sources.

I'm not sure why you got 4 peer reviews... lol. But I think it was a good thing for you, I read them over and I think they all offered great feedback, especially William's and Hannah's and Gissel's! Some students I've been giving a lot more advice to, but your draft seems to be in great condition and your peer reviews seemed helpful, so I won't drag this message out much longer :)

After double checking for formatting, grammar, and style, you can begin publishing live on Wikipedia. (See the "Moving work out of the sandbox" module for more detailed instructions.) --Sjnickerson (talk) 21:14, 20 April 2022 (UTC)