User talk:Nzoch123/sandbox

I think your Wikepedia page did a great job of introducing the topic and the importance of it. Your lead is easy to understand and is neutral. One thing I feel you could add in your lead is a bit more about the history. Has the constitution been amended at all? Your sources definitely look reliable which is great. One overall comment I have about your page is that I think the organization could be improved. I feel there could be an overview of the main points of the constitution, like what rights it protects etc. I think there could then be maybe a historical section. Who produced it, when and has it changed over time. I think there could also be a section on the effectiveness of the constitution. Does it actually protect the rights it says it will protect? I think all of your content is relevant which is great. I think your sources look reliable and you integrate the citations well throughout your article. The only thing is that the citations are a bit unbalanced there is one source used throughout your division of powers section. Another aspect you balance well is that you don't take a super positive or negative perspective.

Great job on the page- I really like this topic. You have a lot of good information about the specifics of the Constitution with and each article. I think that the page could benefit from a background of the Constitution in an additional section. It does not need to be long as you could hyperlink specific things. For example, I would add authors, date and location drafted, date and location published, current location. Another idea I had could be critiques of the Constitution- are there groups that are not protected? Do people support it and abide by the laws. I also think you did a really good job on incorporating a variety and large amount of sources. I recommend adjusting the citations where all the references are listed. By doing this It will organize the article and provide a hyperlink so that whoever is viewing It can easily access the resource. Carlylewin (talk) 21:29, 6 November 2020 (UTC)