User talk:O dunn/sandbox

Becca's comments
instead of Biography - use her name (see other bios for heading and subheading structure) add an info box

early life & education: remove "had" from 2nd sentence at the end of the sentence when you talk about her dissertation you could cite the papers that came out of it

career & research extra period at the end of 1st sentence you need to expand the research section. discuss a few of her most cited papers, discuss the different projects she has worked on. You definitely need more here.

awards and honors awesome!

overall nice job!

Sarah's comments
“Zavaleta was interested in science from a young age after spending time playing outside growing up” -- might reword this sentence to make less awk

“She studied anthropology at Stanford University, then returned to Stanford for a masters in Anthropology.” – what did she get her bachelor’s in?

“Zavaleta is known for her research in environmental change at both global and regional scales, ecology and biodiversity, ecosystems functions, and conservation practice.” – maybe add some more specifics here

“Her family splits time between Telluride Colorado, and California.” – don’t need the comma after Colorado — Preceding unsigned comment added by Boligrafo3 (talk • contribs) 00:32, 11 November 2018 (UTC)