User talk:Oalma1/sandbox

The article is very informative and mostly factual. The title is relevant to the article topic however I was distracted by how dated and old the information was. I also think many new information and sources are accessible today that have not been used. The information can improve in minor ways. All the claims seem accurate and backed up by sources and many facts are presented. All of links work and are in the appropriate format. In the demographic section of the page the information is geared towards specific audience and can be drastically improved because it does not represent a a world wide view on the subject.