User talk:Obr902

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Minor League Baseball Umpire Training Academy
Hello. I have checked your work and I have a few comments. The version you wrote was very promotional, like a press release. While this is great in a newspaper, or on an official website, it is not good on Wikipedia see wp:NPOV. Also, you put a very detailed listing of the staff and curriculum. This is amazing on a handout for prospective students, but not in a Wikipedia article. Information that would be better to include would be history, any major awards won by the school, any controversies... If you need any help improving the article, please let me know. Happy editing! Happy Squirrel (talk) 23:57, 28 May 2015 (UTC)