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heck yahPoppeada000 (talk) 16:23, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer-Review for Mariano's Fresh Market
Lead Section This section should give an in-depth overview of the information in each other section. In the lead section, you may even want to add their mission statement, if they have one, and cite where you found the statement.

Mariano's Departments The sections for each individual department should be condensed to one section to make the article, in its entirety, seem altogether less busy. It would also be good to condense because not every departmental overview has it's own source. That way you could use a few sources for all the sources to verify credibility for the sections that have no sources.

Minor Additions Link Kroger for readers to have an opportunity to read more. You could even mention a little bit about Kroger fetched from the article for Kroger. Just be sure to attribute Kroger information from the article to Main Page: Kroger.

I added it for you, but there's supposed to be a space after each citation at the end of a sentence.

Great work, I'm looking forward to reading the final product! --Bwrite New Mind (talk) 17:28, 26 April 2018 (UTC)