User talk:Oddcat20/Minhal Baig

This article does a good job of highlighting an up-and-coming name in the film industry, Minhal Baig. It documents her promising beginning by explaining how she struggled to find acting jobs as a woman of color and how she eventually gained her footing. The article focuses on her feature film, Hala, and what big names like Jada Pinkett Smith saw in the artist and her first major project. By mentioning and quoting big names, the article helps build Baig’s credibility. I also think the article dedicates ample room to discussing Baig’s other projects like Bojack Horseman and Ramy. Finally, I appreciate that this article raises awareness of the sex-based discrimination that Baig and other female writers experienced on the project Ramy. I think it’s important that the article mentions how Baig’s tweet about the show was taken down. Without that added comment, the article could have been mis-portraying the situation.

There were some things I’d like to see added to this article. For example, is there anything else from her early life to add? Did she attend college? Is there anything else about her family or upbringing to include? Possibly there isn’t more information available on these kinds of questions, but if there was, I think fleshing out this section would help balance coverage between sections. I would like to see the addition of a section that discusses her unique film-making themes and styles in greater depth, even if it just offers an analysis of her feature film only. For example, how does she use color, lighting, sound, narration, etc? Finally, although most sources seem reputable, there is a question of whether source 11, from yahoo.com, is a reliable source.