User talk:Oddonion139/sandbox

It doesn't look like you completed the article evaluation in your Sandbox. BootsGordon (talk) 14:01, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Added peer eval! Jeff $essions (talk) 00:20, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Eval Oddonion139 (By Jamal Husien)
Peer Evaluation

You did a really great job at citing a bunch of stuff and making sure the Wikipedia police wouldn't have a reason to think you're copying anyone! Also, I like how your topic is a very specific subject that would actually be hard to find if no one put it on Wikipedia. Some changes I may suggest is that I remember the modules saying to try to stay away from quotes, rather you should try to summarize. I'm not sure if this is always true, so I'd check with our professor. Also, make sure to make an active link for words or things that people may not be familiar with like "Presbyterian minister" or even "Theology". The most important thing you can do to improve the article is to stay on the same track you're on, as well as making sure your readers will understand everything you mention. Jeff $essions (talk) 00:20, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Evaluation
I think you have a good start here, as far as information goes. However, the second half of the first sentence is very confusing. I'm not sure it's necessary to include all of Witherspoon's titles and accomplishments since the article isn't about him. It takes the attention off of Madison; the main focus of the article. I think you should also link "John Witherspoon" to his wiki page if he has one. Ktack (talk) 23:45, 6 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Evaluation (Kylie Tusing)
I really liked how you cited a bunch of stuff and everything seemed to be very down the line and straight forward (which it obviously should be). Really great start! -Kylie Tusing — Preceding unsigned comment added by KylieTusing (talk • contribs) 13:31, 7 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Evaluation by Confazz
You sourced really well, and I think you wrote it out fair and even. I think this will be a good addition to Madison's Wikipedia entry. Confazz (talk) 21:35, 9 October 2018 (UTC)