User talk:Of Noble Berth/Roman technology/Thegodofchaos Peer Review

Thegodofchaos thanks for your review, it is straightforward, well-organized, and positive. That being said, it's quite short and there are many areas that could be expanded upon to give your peer a clearer direction for the next steps to take. You give one really good example of how to reword a sentence for clarity, but elsewhere you say that there are flowery sentences/language without giving specific details or suggestions for improvement - this sort of constructive criticism is really helpful for your peers so don't be afraid to proofread/edit their work, especially if you don't have many suggestions for them with regard to content. For your next peer review, think of yourself as a partner in the work of improving the article and don't hold back! Grade: 16/20 Gardneca (talk) 21:14, 2 March 2020 (UTC)