User talk:Ofanojk/Buffalo Indian Village Site

I think your lead paragraph is strong and flows nicely, telling us what we could expect further along in the article. The same goes from your paragraph on the archaeological record. Your links to the various areas you discuss are great and where they should be throughout the article. The only question that I have is, did all of your information come from the one book? If so, it is great, if there are any additional sources, I would list them as well.

You are off to a great start! If you continue as strong, you will have a great contribution to Wikipedia!Catghoyt (talk) 15:50, 4 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi Jenna, I would agree that you're off to a great start, and the introduction and discussion of the excavations is much improved. I'd encourage you to try a clarify the chronology a bit though. You mention that there were villages on the site dating to different periods of West Virginia prehistory, which is straightforward enough, but then in the next section where you detail the excavations you don't let us know which of those periods you're talking about. When do we encounter 526 burials?! It might also be helpful to have a sense of the wider cultural connections too (perhaps a separate section?). You don't need to reproduce the Fort Ancient article, but knowing a little bit more about its extent, and possible connections to Late Mississippian Culture as mentioned in the current article is interesting. MP Bwana Msitu (talk) 04:44, 14 October 2020 (UTC)