User talk:Ogthomas927/sandbox

Hello, I reviewed the article in your sandbox and I have some comments and suggestions. I feel that your headings are organized in a logical order. Some things that I noticed are that a taxobox is missing and thus no taxonomic information is present. Also, the information in the first paragraph and the last paragraph does not include citations. Also, the citation is inserted after the punctuation, not before. I realize your are in the process of adding more information but those are some tips to have in mind. Perhaps in the section that talks about the interactions with humans, you could add information on how this species is impacted by fisheries, global climate change, or if they are endangered in any way. I think having information on their growth and reproduction is important to include under the life history heading. Ocean.Melody (talk) 20:33, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi I agree with Ocean.Melody and her suggestions that she has stated above. Your species has a taxobox already prepared on their wikipeida page, you can just copy and paste that into your sandbox. This is a nice start, and you are on the right track but you still need to incorporate more information and sources. You can include predation factors and what they prey on in your article as well. Mmoneil1 (talk) 20:48, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

I agree with what the others have said above. I also think you should either add information to the sections like Introduction or Behavior and life history, or remove them. Mchamilt708 (talk) 15:16, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

I really like the organization of your page. I think it looks clean and precise and is very easy to find exactly what I'm looking for. It lacks a bit of information in then behavior section but I'm sure it was difficult to find research done on this species similar to mine. Otherwise, it looks great! MarinaBarrineau (talk) 02:02, 31 March 2016 (UTC)MarinaBarrineau