User talk:Oguerr1/sandbox

Obviously a lot more work to be done, but a couple of improvements I'd suggest: Jamgreene (talk) 19:50, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) Needs much more detail about the lava flows.  Why are they significant?  Do they represent a large/small portion of Io's geologic history? Are they similar/different from Earth's lava flows? etc.
 * 2) Needs some images, basically the reader has no idea what these flows look like.
 * 3) Needs many more references

Wiki Page Improvements
Hi Orlando, You have a good start but there is some work to be done: [1] Provide and index once you have more information. [2] Provide some figures, more text, maybe a map of the area. [3] Find more papers on the subject if possible, this will obviosuly help you out with everything. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rfox8 (talk • contribs) 04:52, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Hey Orlando, Here are my suggestions... 1. Add a lot more information so the reader knows why to care 2. Add more sources (which will come with more information) 3. Add pictures so the reader cal see what is being discussed Jelorr1 (talk) 14:47, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Review from Graeme Bartlett
If you are using the convert template, the unit for km2 is sqkm and similarly for square miles it is sqmi. If you are writing square kilometers, use km2 which gives:km2. However I would question why does anyone want to see the area in square miles? I think you should explain what a fluctus is before saying "this fluctus". It is interesting that you put your own "citation needed" template on! Instead it would be a good idea for you to say where you got your information from. Even if you don't know how to format it, others can help you get it right if you say what it is. We also need to know why a hotspot has anything to do with this. How old is this fluctus? Is it still erupting/flowing? Is it connected with Pele? Graeme Bartlett (talk) 06:09, 15 March 2014 (UTC)