User talk:Ohaew04/Famine in Yemen/Diamynca Peer Review

You have a lot of information so far which is a good start. I see that in the article, the body paragraphs aren't broken down into different sections compared to other articles I've read so I would try finding key information within each body paragraph and anything that stands out should be expanded into its own section. For example, the paragraph titled "Cause" has sections 1.1 and 1.2. Only if it's necessary though, I would include more sections to go in detail. –––Diamyn