User talk:Okay 17

Neutral point of view
Hi there, these edits at AlDub did not meet our policy on content being presented in a neutral point of view. The tone was way off. Neutral encyclopedias don't speak factually about subjective ideas, like describing something as a "phenomenal success" or describing Lake Como as "the beautiful & most romantic lake in the world". This content comes off as heavily biased, and heavily promotional, neither of which are appropriate for inclusion at Wikipedia. You're free to resubmit the content without the promotional tone. But you should also consider supporting the statement "due to insistent public demand" with context (like if the news reported on a massive petition, or some other noteworthy and verifiable indication of "insistent public demand") and it should be supported with a direct reference. Thank you. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 15:07, 16 June 2016 (UTC)