User talk:Okhauger

Okhauger, you are invited to the Teahouse!

 * Hi Okhauger! My name is Grace, I am in your UGBA class! Love your page, can not wait to collaborate on a project! Gracemorgan192 (talk) 02:00, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Okhauger, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)

Peer review from Wen Liu
I do find your article very informative and engaging, however, I think the structure of your article is still a little bit unclear. I understand you are only adding on to an existing article, so many information already existed before, but it is still necessary to organize your language to let it fit in to the existing article. Please don’t forget to properly cite your sources afterwards, also, I think you might need more sources to support your claim. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Breezelily (talk • contribs) 21:33, 22 October 2017 (UTC)