User talk:OlamideG/new sandbox

Olamide's Peer Review
This was a really good traditional medicine piece. I think that you could add a little more detail into it though. You mention both plants and animals as being important to traditional medicine, so add in more traditional medicine uses of plants. Also, you discuss the importance of traditional medicine but maybe also include the western medicine side of it. ChiBlue99 (talk) 00:43, 26 March 2019 (UTC)

Hey, I went back in and added a chart of animals that are used by the Sukuma people in the Busega District. I wasn't sure about speaking too much on the plant medicine since we are focusing on the animal trade, but if it will enhance my article I can do it. There is no shortage of information on plant medicine for this tribe. I replied to Miranda saying that I have a rough outline of what the rest of my article will consist of (most used animal medicines and effect on population/health). Im hoping I can find data on that, but if it looks scanty I will probably add a section about how western medicine has influenced the culture or maybe eradicated traditional medicine in that region altogether.

OlamideG (talk) 03:20, 4 April 2019 (UTC)