User talk:Olivesue/sandbox

Hello
Hello wiki! Olivesue (talk) 01:59, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Review (so far) by Jillian
- need to work more on the format of the article. Reference other Wiki pages for help.

needs work! please get crackin' if you want feedback from fellow students and well as Amy and myself before going live. The first draft was due last week! Sickcakez (talk) 17:49, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
The information is completely solid yet! But i love that you included a chart! I'd say format things and include more information along side the numbers as you continue to work AlyaDuusu (talk) 16:37, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

The chronology of the information is good, and the table is definetly helpful but maybe reduce the amount of listed information and talk more about the work in the article itself, also make sure to pay attention to formatting and sourcing JEHNEDO (talk) 07:22, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Review
This is far from a first draft. Format lead section so that it follows Wikipedia format. The first sentences should provide an overview of her entire career and sense of her notability. Use you the info from your bibliography to write the rest of your entry. Format your bibliography so that it follows Wikipedia format. Review Wikipedia's info on citations: WP:CS You should also review Wikipedia's guidelines on writing biographical entries. AmyDeer (talk) 20:43, 6 March 2018 (UTC)