User talk:Olivia.bakken/Homelessness in Germany

Hi I just reviewed your article and it looks like you are on the right track. Good job! Here is the link of my review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Olivia.bakken/Homelessness_in_Germany/S1tongYang_Peer_Review?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review S1tongYang (talk) 02:50, 1 February 2020 (UTC)

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your change history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!

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While you are good to go, here are a few suggestions that will really make your additions shine:


 * Use the short description template around your paragraph above the Table of Contents. Remember that this is the first person anyone will read on the page, since when was there a "150% increase"?
 * The "History" section seems a little light. Perhaps adding subheadings and filling out different sections? For instance, I'm guessing that the period between WWI and WWII was different than the period between WWII and the falling of the Berlin Wall.
 * Try to find an infobox that is relevant (though I couldn't find any immediately).
 * Add some additional templates or categories, for instance Category:Homelessness appears to not have been copied from the original article. Also, try to link it with the relevant WikiProject, likely WikiProject Germany and/or WikiProject Urban studies and planning.
 * Add a "See also" section of related articles and a "External links" section, if there is something relevant.
 * Clean up the formatting a bit, I see some missing periods and spaces, for instance "Dr.Busch".
 * Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 07:10, 12 February 2020 (UTC)