User talk:Olivia P.

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Child Abduction
Dear Olivia, thanks for adding the mediation paragraph to the child abduction article, which I think is a good idea. I modified some things and want to explain here what I did.... What remains is, as I said, a good addition, but it needs reliable sources, independent from the NGOs themselves. Would have such sources that we can add?
 * I removed the section showing what emotional stress children and parents go through, because I felt this was handled already in the previous sections
 * I removed the section on the specific German NGO, as I though that would give undue weight to a specific organization (it sounded more like an "example"
 * I removed the links to the dutch organizations etc; because the wikipedia guidelines do not allow general links in sections (and only under strict rules in the "external links"

Again, welcome to wikipedia, and I hope you'll enjoy editing here! L.tak (talk) 20:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)