User talk:Oliviabuckwheat

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  Chzz  ► 21:12, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.)
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, you can use the edit button at the top of the article, near the search bar
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Help desk or the [ reviewer's talk page]. Alternatively you can ask a reviewer questions via live help
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Bryce  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 01:44, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Article comments
So... after our help channel chat I took a closer look and marked up your draft considerably. I found several different issues: generalizations, sympathetic (non-neutral) phrasing, reliance on insider/advocacy sources, and lack of citations for information. If you work on each of these I think the article will be much closer to acceptance. The most important step might just be more research for additional unbiased sources. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers, Ocaasit 03:57, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.)
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, you can use the edit button at the top of the article, near the search bar
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Help desk or the [ reviewer's talk page]. Alternatively you can ask a reviewer questions via live help
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  Chzz  ► 20:16, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 School-Based Health Centers, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! :- ) DCS 06:21, 4 February 2012 (UTC) Nice job.  :- ) DCS  06:27, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
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A belated welcome!
Here's wishing you a belated welcome to Wikipedia, Oliviabuckwheat. I see that you've already been around a while and wanted to thank you for your contributions, especially for your nice work on School-Based Health Centers. Though you seem to have been successful in finding your way around, you may benefit from following some of the links below, which help editors get the most out of Wikipedia: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); that should automatically produce your username and the date after your post.
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 * The five pillars of Wikipedia
 * How to edit a page
 * Help pages
 * How to write a great article

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on, consult Questions, or place helpme on your talk page and ask your question there.

Again, welcome! Brendon is here  07:16, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Welcome
I wanted to ask you a Question. Do you like your user-page in its current form? If yes, then cool. However, if you don't like it and want to make it look even better, then follow these steps (and in that case, I'm happy to help):Open your User-page.Click "edit this page"/"edit" (above) to edit the page Add - New user bar above everything else in the content area of that page (whatever you write below will be shown under the section "About me"). click "show preview" (below). Now, if you like it, click "save page" (below).  AFAIK, the codes work on internet explorer and other browsers like Mozilla firefox too. If they don't work try clicking "enter" after pressing the keys of code. "++e" - "Edit the page" "++p" - "Show Preview"<li>"++s" - "save page"<li></ol> Note:
 * Mac OS X-users must hold (in stead of +), and press the desired access key (e, p or s), I guess.
 * If these keys don't work by themselves press after them without changing the order, to initiate the intended process.

I hope this helps. Brendon is here  07:18, 5 May 2012 (UTC)